the memories i have of you
are sad but true
burdened by your reminiscence
i find myself fading away in my tears
my soul feels trapped
it needs to escape
in this ruse called life
i can’t find my truce
for i have forlorn the verve to go on
lost, torn and shattered are my dreams
yet i am not fearful
because i know that i will rise again
like a phoenix, to fly again
only to burn you with me!
are sad but true
burdened by your reminiscence
i find myself fading away in my tears
my soul feels trapped
it needs to escape
in this ruse called life
i can’t find my truce
for i have forlorn the verve to go on
lost, torn and shattered are my dreams
yet i am not fearful
because i know that i will rise again
like a phoenix, to fly again
only to burn you with me!
11 comments:
nice 1...need to have a dictionary to undrstnd all of it..lollz...it ws superb..this time ur feelings are more pronounced..n y hv u copied my lines? lookin 4waard to ur nxt post..
haha.. dream on mama....where in hell have i copied lines from u!!!....newayzz thanks a lot for readin bro waitin 2 read ur next one too!!! ;)
Wow...i didnt knw u cud write like this soccer my love.... This is too touching...Straight to the heart.... You are amazing....
ps... I luv warrior too...He's amazing...whole new level....btw this is really me writing...bulby...no really... not a fake profile....and certainly not the great warrior's brilliant idea....
cheers
Dude how is this a poem ? It has no proper metrical structure nor rhyming scheme....
wah yaar!!! kya emotions!!! badhiya hai be... STUD RA infact...!! lookin forward to ur next pohm....!!!
good stuff goks!...very well written. You could actually stretch up it's lenghth and there you have the next song for your band:D... newys visited after a darn long tym..well worth..keep posting..cheers
@bulby: HAHAHAHAHA... ;-)
@3electron!!!(haha)... neways... all poems need not rhyme... there are diffrent styles to write poems.....n i use a diffrent style... thanks 4 reading!!
@jumper: thanks da mama....;-).... sTuD rA!!!!
@gaurav: thanks dude... i am working on 2 of my poems... i want to make them as 2 whole songs... lets see if i am able to do it!!!...
stud mann! profound...
p.s.: the dictionary really came handy :P
ik din aayega... jab tere blog par comment aayega....
@sim: thanks dude.... i always wait for your comments on the blog!!!!... thanks for reading bro!! ;-)
@jumper: haha usee din ka intezaar!!!! ;-)
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