I see you leaving my sight
i want to stop you
but the path you trod
is too good for me to stop you
i want you in my arms
yet i don't want to hold you back
the touch of your palm
the smell of your hair
the sight of your face
is all i have
but i am safe
i feel safe, because i know
even if you are not with me
you are still with me.!!!!
i want to stop you
but the path you trod
is too good for me to stop you
i want you in my arms
yet i don't want to hold you back
the touch of your palm
the smell of your hair
the sight of your face
is all i have
but i am safe
i feel safe, because i know
even if you are not with me
you are still with me.!!!!
14 comments:
That's romantic dude....!!! Meri 'pohm' ko bhi peechhe chhod diya!!! God levelaa...
mama entra...chaala senti aayippoyinthi...what happened??
@jumper: thank u bro!!... haha... n your 'pohm' rocked 2!! cheers
@wazeem: mama i wrote this for someone a while back... i had not put any new post on my page so i posted this!!!!.... :-)....
just dnt cm again with another story...needless to say its as good as ur previous 1s.
p.s. i m back now n i wud write u a testi. i hv 1 in my mind..c u sn bro.
haha... dun wry bro i won't!!! thankz a ton for readin!! ...
hurtful. but they say - from ashes the phoenix rose. cheers! tc!
Good going Soccer,
Keep writing such gr888 "POMS"
this one's really touching...
keep it up....
njoy..
:)
@sim!! : :) thanks for reading!! haha lets see!!!
@avin: baba did not expect to see you here... thanks for reading!!! :)
dude.....i lik d poem but d thing iz u r soundid devdas.....i knw who iz ur site in diz poem.....get out of supriya shit.....slutz hav a vry bad smeel n sight....imagine neha...d poem well definitely get better....chill mar.....
@pritam: bro!!!! please refrain from using such appalling lingo here(in my blog)!!!.... :) anywayz i wrote this a long time back, so it does not mean anything now... !!!!.... as i had not posted anything new for a while, i had to post this!!!! haha.... neha.. eh!!! i'll try that out!!! ;).. anyways nice to see u here too!!! :)
u r gud dude..i logged in to read ur poem again..its gud..2 gud..
arre gokuuuoolll tu toh poet ban gaya ha reee...:D
i think this is my favorite out of the ones you have on here.
you can feel the emotion in it
@ widow : hey thanks a lot for reading .... it means a lot when it comes from a blogger like you..... cheers :D
Post a Comment