Thursday, December 31, 2009

The Sage of Kailasha Pt-1

once upon a time, atop kailasha
sat a sage, who was woken up by his rage
the bearer of trident with powers
knowledge desire and execution
drum on the trident
that chants the teachings of vedas
a serpent around his neck
his ego, his ornament
rudraksh in his hand
his hair knotted like a dress
within his hair dwells ganga
which flows through time, passing wisdom
transpired from one epoch to the other
moon on his forehead
the master of time , timeless himself
the possessor of the third eye of knowledge
destroyer of evil and ignorance
cosmic dancer who when performs
his divine dance destroys a weary universe
for he is the one who personifies purity
one called the red one....

for he scowled at the man who broke his meditation
he looked down upon him
the man looked up at the sage
dawned his spiteful tale
the sage listened... though his ire persisted

10 comments:

Aroused said...

hey good 1 bro but i couldn't understnd the sudden chng of heart frm devils and demons to lord shiv..u surely have chngd..ha ha..the poem ws gud..waitn for part 2..

Unknown said...

kya ho gaya bhai??? suddenly became all religious... but the poem was good...

Nikhil BAndale said...

haha but Lord Shiva is the ultimate bad ass God!
He destroys! ( and smokes up in the Himalayas :P )

Varun said...

Yaar, ye kahani hai ki poem. Thoda kanphoojhan hai. As for bad ass gods, read Virgin comics India Authentic series for fundae.

dethsoul said...

@aroused: i was trying out new avenues for writing poems bro.. lol.. no change of heart.

@jumper: same bhai... thanks for reading.....

@nikhil(pony): i know bro..... he rocks!! :)

@varuun: its a poem... which tells a story.... this is a poem because of the usage of heavy symbolism in the verses... go through it carefully you'll pick some up... thanks for reading!! :)

Aroused said...

arey baap re..sahi mein yaar there are times i get ur puns and symbolisms...u rawk..

Abhinav Verma said...

hmm ..impressive ..

Abhishek Behera said...

baap rey! yeh kya tha? :O

dawn of the divine rock star?

Abhishek Behera said...

the blog is aptly named. awesome. keep writing dude!

dethsoul said...

@ anupam: thanks for reading my again!!

@abhinav: thanks dude! :)

@ sim: yea sure... your comments always motivate me dude... thanks a ton! :)